Then there would be a straight cut into the the female leaving her house but the camera would be in deep focus on the phone because the boyfriends text would come up as the female leaves the house in the background. As the scene develops you see the female victim arrives at the house party, once see is partying you see that see is rapidly getting drunk and dancing while the audience will see the antagonist from a low angle tilt shot in the corner of the room, as the strobe lights flickers from the antagonist to the victim few times. As the female victim leaves the party she decides to walk through the dark and desolated park, as the female victim walks camera capture a long shot view where you see that there is another person behind her... Which is the antagonist following from the party. Also there is more shots where the camera is on the floor and you see the two characters walks past it, also from the long shot you see the female walks closer to the camera. As you see the female about to fall the antagonist catches her before the hard fall but then see gets kidnapped by him, but as he tries to kidnap her she struggles to get out...
Towards the end of the scene, you as an audience have a point of view of the female when there is a bag that comes off her head with a strong blinding light, but then dims down into low key lighting. Then you see the antagonist revel himself and the victim is shown in a unknown location of where she is, as the camera cuts to the antagonist walking towards her, you see a panning shot of the camera showing all of the power tools and knife ETC on a table, with some of the victims clothing, also sees some plastic sleeves,once the antagonist get close to her he starts touching her and cutting her nails and he uses the plastic sleeves to take strand of her hair that he has taken, some of her nail clipping and all of these weird things... As you see the antagonist enjoying this you see a quick flash of an image with the female victim with the boyfriend as the antagonist is in the background of the image, which triggers the antagonist to to change his intentions of what he was going to do with her...
As the antagonist is showing to be going crazy and messes up everything around him, throwing tools falling and slapping himself ETC, you see a close up of his face with the intention to kill her, then the audience are left with the image of her knocked out on a chair with a shovel that goes into the ground. With the audience left think is the female going to be burried dead or alive....
Towards the end of the scene, you as an audience have a point of view of the female when there is a bag that comes off her head with a strong blinding light, but then dims down into low key lighting. Then you see the antagonist revel himself and the victim is shown in a unknown location of where she is, as the camera cuts to the antagonist walking towards her, you see a panning shot of the camera showing all of the power tools and knife ETC on a table, with some of the victims clothing, also sees some plastic sleeves,once the antagonist get close to her he starts touching her and cutting her nails and he uses the plastic sleeves to take strand of her hair that he has taken, some of her nail clipping and all of these weird things... As you see the antagonist enjoying this you see a quick flash of an image with the female victim with the boyfriend as the antagonist is in the background of the image, which triggers the antagonist to to change his intentions of what he was going to do with her...
As the antagonist is showing to be going crazy and messes up everything around him, throwing tools falling and slapping himself ETC, you see a close up of his face with the intention to kill her, then the audience are left with the image of her knocked out on a chair with a shovel that goes into the ground. With the audience left think is the female going to be burried dead or alive....
Well done, your scene is well described and it is clear you have a good idea of what will happen in your thriller which is further good evidence of planning.
ReplyDeleteTo improve;
-what will the storyboard contain that the anatagonist is looking at?
-cross cuts take you to a new scene